帮我看一下读不读得通或者有没有语法错误~最重要的是弟1篇~可以先看第1篇发表意见,其他的可以慢一点~Friendshipisakindofrelationshipthatmanyaccompanyyouallyourlife.Friendshipistoourlifewhatsalti

　　帮我看一下读不读得通或者有没有语法错误~

　　最重要的是弟1篇~可以先看第1篇发表意见,其他的可以慢一点~

　　Friendshipisakindofrelationshipthatmanyaccompanyyouallyourlife.Friendshipistoourlifewhatsaltistodasher.Whenyouarehappy,friendshipisjustlikeaddingflowersonthebrocade;whenyouaresad,friendshipisadoseofconsolation;ifyouareintrouble,friendswillsurroundyouandremovethebarriersforyou.Ialsohavemanyfriends.Weplayanythingtogether,gohometogether,andweoftengoshoppingintheweekend.AndIfeelhappywhenIwithmyfriends.AndIreallyknowfriendshipisn'talmighty,butnoonecanlivehappilywithoutit.

　　ThoughIamoccupiedwithmystudy,Iwouldliketospendtimeonmyhobbies,suchasreading,playingcomputergames.

　　Oneofmyfavoritehobbiesisplayingthepiano.Playingthepianohasbeeninmylifeformanyyears.WhenIsadIwillplayitandbecauseofitIwillforgetsomethingletmesad.AndwhenIhappyIalsoplayittocheer.AndI’msureplaythepianoismostimportanttinginmylife.Theymakemyday-todaylifewonderfulandcolorful.ButIhavennomoretimetoplayitbecauseIbusystudying.AndwhenIhavemyhobbyIknowtherealmeanofhobby.Ithink.Itissomethingweliketodoinourfreetimesimplyforthefunofit.Thevalueinmoneyisnotimportant,butthepleasureitgivesusis.

　　Iam’alwaysbusywithmylessons.WhatIhavetodoeverydayisnothingbutstudy.

　　Luckily,lastsummermyfamilywenttothecountrysideitisverybeautifulthere.Therearegreenplants,lovelyanimalsandkindpeople.Icanbreathingthefreshair,listeningtothebirdssinging,andenjoyingthegreentrees,redflowersandtheriver.

　　Duringtheholiday,Ididn’thavetogetupearly,ordidn’tneedtofinishmanyexercises.Icangofishingwithmyparents.Andmyparentsaskmetodosomefarmworkthere.Iknowthat’stheywanttoletmeknowwhat’sthenicelifeIhave.Weenjoyedareallyinterestingholidaythere.Iwanttogobacktospendmysummerholidayagain.