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　　【Myheroisadoctor,whosavemylifewhenIcouldhavedied.Infact,shehassavedquiteafewchildren'slives.Attheageoffive,Iwasseriousillandmylifewasindanger.MyparentswereallworriedifIcouldrecoverfromthedisease,Iwasluckyen】

　　Myheroisadoctor,whosavemylifewhenIcouldhavedied.Infact,shehassavedquiteafew

　　children'slives.Attheageoffive,Iwasseriousillandmylifewasindanger.MyparentswereallworriedifIcouldrecoverfromthedisease,IwasluckyenoughtomeetDr.Jack,agreatdoctorwhoisalwayseasttotalk.Hedidlotsofdifferentteststofindthemedicinetocureme.IowetohimthatIamstillalive.Dr.Jack,hehasmadeabigdifferencetothelivesofothers,isrespectedbymanypeopleinourcity.改错

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2020-12-09 01:17

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　　Myheroisadoctor,whosave(改为saved)mylifewhenIcouldhavedied.

　　Infact,she(改为he,根据下文,此医生是男滴.)hassavedquiteafewchildren'slives.

　　Attheageoffive,Iwasserious(改为seriously)illandmylifewasindanger.

　　Myparentswereall(改为both,指“两者都”.all指“三者或三者以上都”)worriedifIcouldrecoverfromthedisease.

　　IwasluckyenoughtomeetDr.Jack,agreatdoctor,whoisalwayseasttotalk.

　　Hedidlotsofdifferentteststofind(加上out,表示“找出”.为了找出救我的药,做了各种测试.find强调结果,指已经发现了的.)themedicinetocureme.

　　IowetohimthatIamstillalive.

　　Dr.Jack,he(改为who)hasmadeabigdifferencetothelivesofothers,isrespectedbymanypeopleinourcity.

2020-12-09 01:21:14

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