帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么问题吧~（单词拼写和语法）【书信】Dearparents,Imissyouso,andhopeeverythinggoeswellwithyou.TodayIamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmylifehereinShenzhen.Asyouknow,Iamsohapp

　　帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么问题吧~（单词拼写和语法）【书信】

　　Dearparents,

　　Imissyouso,andhopeeverythinggoeswellwithyou.TodayIamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmylifehereinShenzhen.

　　Asyouknow,IamsohappytovisitShenzhenagain,greatchangeshavetakenplacesincemyfirstvisit3yearsago.WhenmentioningShenzhen,peopleneverforgettospeakofHuaqiangRoad,itisaverybusycommercialdistrict,IoftenvisittheITdigitalshopstherewhenIhavesparetime,sometimesItakeawalkalongtheroadinthemorningatweekend；besides,therearemanybeautifulhigh-risebuildingsthere,whichlookveryspectacularandgorgeouswhenthenightapproachesandstreetlampsbegintolight.

　　Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

　　Bestregards.

　　Yourssincerely

　　Kim