【英语翻译能帮我检查下以下两段话语法时态是否有问题吗?大侠也可以适当帮我润色写的复杂一点,Weareresponsiblefordifferentgroups,butweusuallyworktogetherforthedepartmenteventorsomeotherthings.Iwork】

　　英语翻译

　　能帮我检查下以下两段话语法时态是否有问题吗?大侠也可以适当帮我润色写的复杂一点,

　　Weareresponsiblefordifferentgroups,butweusuallyworktogetherforthedepartmenteventorsomeotherthings.Iworkedwithmacyforfiveyears,andIfounditpleasanttoworkwithher.WehadthesportmeetingonthisMarch.Tonyasthecoordinatorofthisevent,heprovidedmanyusefulsuggestionsononperformanceandspentalotoftimeonotherarrangements.Everyonehasawonderfuldaywithhishardworkandcontributions.

　　不好意思,题目可能写的误导了.不是需要中文翻译,是想问一下,这两段英语,写的有没有语法或者搭配错误~