【麻烦帮我的作文改改语法请英文很好的来,最好是老师的或学霸,请勿乱改Inthestories“Thestoryofanhour”and“LambtoTheSlaughter”.Theyboththroughonthemethatiswomenlivedundermarriagepressure.Inthetwos】

　　麻烦帮我的作文改改语法

　　请英文很好的来,最好是老师的或学霸,请勿乱改

　　Inthestories“Thestoryofanhour”and“LambtoTheSlaughter”.Theyboththroughonthemethatiswomenlivedundermarriagepressure.Inthetwostories,womentookdifferentactiontofacethemarriagepressure.In“Thestoryofanhour”,Mrs.Mallardstartedtodreamaboutthenewspringlife,butshedidnottaketheinitiative,justherimagination.Bycontrast,inthestory“LambtoTheSlaughter”,Mrs.Maloneyshowedherinitiative.Shegotherfreedombykillingherhusbandintheend.Inthestory“Thestoryofanhour”,theauthorshowedusaweakwomen(Mrs.Mallard).Shedidn’tdoanythingtobecomeafreewomen,shejustwallowedinimage(theupstairs).Likethestorysaid“Shecouldsee…..springlife”(paragraph5)and“Shebreathed……thelifemightbelong.”(P16)Mrs.Mallarddreamedaboutherfreedomthroughthatwindow,butitdidnotchangeanything,shedidnotchangeherlifebyheractualbehavior.Themarriageoppressedherforalongtime.Shestoodatapassivepositionandavoidoftherealitybuttherealitypulledherofftheimageattheend.Accordingtothestory“LambtoTheSlaughter”,Mrs.Maloneywasalsolivedunderthemarriagepressure.ButshehadthetotallydifferentendingwithMrs.Mallardbyherbehavior.Thewriterusethelambtosymbolizeher,sheusedtobeweakandlovelywifeunderherhusbandpower.Shedideverythingforthehusband.Shegothisslippers;makesdinnerandslavesoverhim.Buttheonlythingherhusbandwantsnowisaquitedivorce.Soshefoughtbacktoherhusbandlike“Atthatpoint……ofhishead.(P27)The“weak”wifekilledherhusband,shestoodataactiveposition.Mrs.Maloneykilledherhusbandtoagainstthepressure,shekilledherstatueasaweaklambaswell,afreewomenleft.Inconclusion,bothstoriesshowedthatwomenwereoppressedbymarriage,butitwasreallyimportantonwhatkindofpositionyouin.Beinitiativeorpassivity,theendingwillbetotallydifferent.