可不可以帮我改一下这篇英语作文,帮我加上一些好的句子和内容,最后结尾AnEnjoyableTripLastyear,IwenttoEnglandwithmyfamily.Ihadwonderfultrip.Onthefirstday,wewenttoLondon,thecapitalofEngland.Wevisite

　　可不可以帮我改一下这篇英语作文,帮我加上一些好的句子和内容,最后结尾

　　AnEnjoyableTrip

　　Lastyear,IwenttoEnglandwithmyfamily.Ihadwonderfultrip.

　　Onthefirstday,wewenttoLondon,thecapitalofEngland.

　　WevisitedsomeattractionssuchasBuckinghampalace,BigBenandBritishMuseum.

　　WhenweenteredtheBuckinghampalacehall,weweresurprised.Becauseitwaswonderful.

　　BigBenwasthebiggestclockintheEngland,alsoitwasthesymbolsofLondon.

　　BritishMuseumisoneofthemostfamousmuseumintheworld.Itcollectedthepreciouscollectionfromdifferentcountries.

　　InvisitingtheBritishmuseum,IlearnedEngland’shistoryandculture.

　　Onthenextday,wewenttooxfordstreet,itwastheLondonshoppingcentre.Ithadlotsoffamousbrandanditcanletyouenjoyedadvancedservice.Iboughtsomesouvenirstomyfriends.

　　Intheafternoon,wetrieddifferentBritishfoodsuchasEnglishfishchip,roastedbeefandYorkshirepudding.

　　IfIhadachance,Iwouldliketogothereagain.