【各位帮我看看几句英文语法对不1.SheisanoutstandingstudentandIwasdeeplyimpressedwithhernotonlysheisaspecificstudentinourdepartment,butmoreimportantly,becauseofthecapabilityandeagernessforfurtheracademicpur】
各位帮我看看几句英文语法对不
1.SheisanoutstandingstudentandIwasdeeplyimpressedwithhernotonlysheisaspecificstudentinourdepartment,butmoreimportantly,becauseofthecapabilityandeagernessforfurtheracademicpursuitshedemonstratedwhilelearningtheknowledgeinvolvedinmyclass.(notonly后面要加because吗)
2.MissWualwaysdothehomeworkseriously,sheaimherselfasoneofthememberinourdepartment.(中间不加and可以吗)
3.What’smore,notonlyissheinquisitiveandkeentoprobeintonewproblemsandknowledge,andalsocanshedevoteherselftothedetailed,elementary,time-consumingworksinsolvingproblems.(可以用andalso吗?还是应该改成butalso?)
事实上是中介写的,我看了感觉有点问题才问的
中介说第三句是老外写的,没有错。。。