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　　帮忙修改一下英语作文.只要把语法错误和词汇错误纠正出来.TodayIwanttotalkaboutsomethingwhichtheItaliansliketoeatbest,thatismacaroni.MacaroniisanItalianfoodanditisalsoverypopularallroundtheworld.T

　　帮忙修改一下英语作文.只要把语法错误和词汇错误纠正出来.

　　TodayIwanttotalkaboutsomethingwhichtheItaliansliketoeatbest,thatismacaroni.MacaroniisanItalianfoodanditisalsoverypopularallroundtheworld.TheItalianslikethemasthesamewaywelikerice.InItaly,onesingleItalianeats28kilogramsofmacaronieveryyear.

　　Nowexpertshavedifferentideasaboutthehistoryofthemacaroni.Somebelievethatthegreatexplorer,MarcopolohadtakenthemfromChinatoItaly.ButmoreexpertsaresurethatEtruscans,whoatthattime,hadoncebeentheresidentsofNorthernItaly,hadbeguntomakemacaroniearlyinthe7thcentury.ForlargewoodentableswhichweresurelyusedtomixflourandcookersthatwereconsideredascookingmacaroniswerefoundintheEtruscanruins.ThosearethebestevidencetoprovetheinventorsofthemacaroniwereItalians.

　　Today,peoplealwayscookthemacaroniwithketchup,cheese,pepper,mushrooms,etc.Theseprovethefactthatwehavemadeagreatmanyprogressincookingthemacaroni.Macaronialsohasitslargefamily.Zita,Ennie,Lasagne,OrzoRoute,Capellini…Macaronihasreachedover500kindsandwehavealreadyhad2000waystocookthefood.Wewillneverhavethechancetotastemostofthem.SoifyouplantohavesomemacaroniforToday’sdinner,trytocookitinadifferentway.Iwishyoucanhaveagoodappetite.

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　　TodayIwanttotalkaboutsomething(which删去或用that,先行词是不定代词,关系代词用that)theItaliansliketoeatbest,thatismacaroni.Macaroniis（an删去,food是不可数名词,不可与a连用）Italianfoodanditisalsoverypopularallroundtheworld.TheItalianslikeit（them改为it）asmuchas（thesameway删去）welikerice.InItaly,one（single删去）Italianeats28kilogramsofmacaronieveryyear.

　　Nowexpertshavedifferentideasaboutthehistoryof（the删去）macaroni.Somebelievethatthegreatexplorer,Marcopolohadtakenit（them改为it）fromChinatoItaly.ButmoreexpertsaresurethatEtruscans,whoatthattime,hadoncebeentheresidentsofNorthernItaly,hadbeguntomakemacaroniearlyinthe7thcentury.ForlargewoodentableswhichweresurelyusedtomixflourandcookersthatwereconsideredascookingmacaroniswerefoundintheEtruscanruins.ThosearethebestevidencetoprovetheinventorsofthemacaroniwereItalians.

　　Today,peoplealwayscook（the删去）macaroniwithketchup,cheese,pepper,mushrooms,etc.Theseprove（thefact删去）thatwehavemadeagreat（many删去）progressincooking（the删去）macaroni.Macaronialsohasitslargefamily.Zita,Ennie,Lasagne,OrzoRoute,Capellini…Macaronihasreachedover500kindsandwehavealreadyhad2000waystocookthefood.Wewillneverhavethechancetotastemostofthem.SoifyouplantohavesomemacaroniforToday’sdinner,trytocookitinadifferent

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