谁能帮我改下作文Somepeoplethinkthatexaminationshavesomebadeffectsonbothstudentsandteachers.Somepeoplesaytheydoagoodjobintheevaluationofthestudents’performance.Whatisyouropinion?Nowadays,educationisapopulart

　　谁能帮我改下作文

　　Somepeoplethinkthatexaminationshavesomebadeffectsonbothstudentsandteachers.Somepeoplesaytheydoagoodjobintheevaluationofthestudents’performance.Whatisyouropinion?

　　Nowadays,educationisapopulartopicinsociety.Heateddebatehasbeengoingonaboutwhethertheexaminationsdoabadjobonbothstudentsandteachersorhavesomepositiveeffectsontheevaluationofstudents'performance.Somepeopleagreewiththeformerview,otherssupportthelatterview.AsfarasIconcerned,Iaminfavouroftheexaminationsarebenefittothestudent'sperformance.

　　Thereisnodenyingthatexaminationsaregoodforstudents'performance.Tostartwith,thestudentcanknowmoreaboutinformationoftheirstudyaccordingtotheexaminations.Theycanfindtheirshortageofthestudy,thenmakemucheffortinsomecertainarea.Byspecializetrainingforonepart,theycanmakeprogressquickly.Furthermore,becauseoftheexaminationsandinordertogainawonderfulmarkinit,thestudentshavetostudyhard.Duringtheexaminationtime,allthestudentsshouldbenervous.Lastbutnotleast.Theycangaintheevaluationofownperformance,.Oneday,theyleaveschool,theycancarryitout.Moreover,itwillbeasignforyourownselfintheinterview.Itisveryuseful.therefore,Iprefertheexaminationsinpublics'life

　　Whereas,thethatexaminationsalsodosomebadeffectsonbothteachersandstudents.Forstudent,theyshouldfaceahugeissuewhentheysufferfromtheexaminations.Iftheygainthebadmark,inphysical,theywillfeelsenseoffailure.Becauseofthebadmark.,theymighthatethestudy.Thatisterribly.Forteacher,theymustteachinordertomakethestudentgainagoodmark.Theyhavetoignorethehobbyofstudy,whichtheynotwillingtodo.Furthermore.theywillmarkastudentbecauseofhisstudentmake.Itisnotreasonable.

　　Inconclusion.comparingtwoviews,itisobviousthatexaminationshavemorepositiveeffectsthansomebadeffects.Inthecontemporarysociety,examinationsisthebestchoice.So,thestudentscannotlivewithouttheexaminations,aswellastheteachers.