帮我看看.看我哪儿错了?改一下.谢谢.我急用~Refertohobby.Ihavealotofhobbies.Forexamplereading,singing,travelingandsoon.WhenIsingingIfeelverycoolandenjoythesongs.travelingcanletmerelaxandembracebymother

　　帮我看看.看我哪儿错了?改一下.谢谢.我急用~

　　Refertohobby.Ihavealotofhobbies.Forexamplereading,singing,travelingandsoon.WhenIsingingIfeelverycoolandenjoythesongs.travelingcanletmerelaxandembracebymothernature.ButIprefertoread.Thereasonisreadingbookcanletmeknowlotsofthings.Bookshelpedmetoenlargetheextensionoftheknowledge.SoIthinkbooksismyteacher.Ilikereadingbooks.

　　4.Introduceyourfamily.

　　Ihaveanicefamily.Therehasfivepeopleinmyfamily.Mymother,father,sisterhusbandandI.Mymotherislittlebitoverweight.Ireallylovemymother’scook..andmyfatherisstrong.Ialsohaveabeautifulsister.sheisverycute..Whenwewasyong.welikestickesthatalwaystogether..eating,sleeping,shoppingandsoon.wealwaysdealwithsomething.NowIhaveanicehusband.Heispoliceman.Iamveryhonortohim.Becausehecanproectpeople.