【请哪位英文学的好的大神帮我改一下这个分词的纠错题好吗?1.Seenonthetopofahill,thistownlooksquitemagnificent.3.Canyouletmehavingalookatthepoetrypublishinglastweek?4.Havingbeenlearntthenews,theseforeign】

　　请哪位英文学的好的大神帮我改一下这个分词的纠错题好吗?

　　1.Seenonthetopofahill,thistownlooksquitemagnificent.

　　3.Canyouletmehavingalookatthepoetrypublishinglastweek?

　　4.Havingbeenlearntthenews,theseforeignersbeginningtohaveadiscussioninthelisteningroom.

　　5.Robertandhismomwereseeingarrestingbythosepolice.

　　6.Pleasetakeapictureofthosemovedfireenginesonthestreet.

　　7.Don’tsingagainthattedioussongrepeatbythem.

　　8.Whosawthosekidsdrewpicturesonthelawn?

　　9.Reviewedhisnotes,Thomaswascopyingdownpassagesfromthetextbook.

　　10.WestartedtotakeapartthecomputerborrowedfromLisayesterday.

　　注：1.把每句中的语法错误找出来并纠错.

　　我这个学得太差了弄不清,如果可以给我讲解一下就更好了,