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  【请帮我看看这篇文章有无语法错误?goodmorning!/goodingafternoon!/goodevering!allofyoudistinguishedjudges!firstofall,letmeintroducemyself.surelytheformerspeechsofotherstudentsarewonderful,butithoughtyoumaybealitt】

  请帮我看看这篇文章有无语法错误?

  goodmorning!/goodingafternoon!/goodevering!allofyoudistinguishedjudges!

  firstofall,letmeintroducemyself.surelytheformerspeechsofotherstudentsarewonderful,butithoughtyoumaybealittlebittired.solet'sbemoreexcitednow.IamIhy,acommonstudentofexperimentmiddleschool.iamalittlenervous,youmustfoughtit,right?butinfactiamaoutgouingboy.ihavealotofhobbys,suchasplayingbadminton,playingpingpingballandsoon.sometimesiamgoingtoswim.andnow,perhapsyoumaywanttoaskmeonequestion"what'syourenlgishname?"iwouldliketotelyouallseriously,"ihavenoenglishname!"ithoughtatruechineseneednotenglishatall.ithink,tolearnenglishisjusttomakeourcountrymuchmorestronger.atthesametime,iloveenglishverymuchindeed!trustme!iamnotaactor,soithoughtidon'tneedtopretendtolovingit.iloveenglish,justfromthedeepsoulofmyself.that'swhyiamhere!that'sall!thankyouverymuchforyourlistening!

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2020-12-18 01:34
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郭长波

  第一行goodafternoon

  第三行speeches

  第四行but换成and因为没转折意思

  solet'sbemoreexcitednow这句不知道你要表达什么

  youmustfoughtit不太好你是要说“你们一定感觉到了吧!”吗youmayfeelthat

  Iam:iam

  playingbadminton,playingpingpingball后面的playing可以不要了,以免重复

  sometimesiamgoingtoswim这是一般现在时不用一般将来时sometimesigotoswim

  ithoughtatruechineseneednotenglishatall.你是要说要不要英文名字不重要吗?ithoughtaenglishnameisnotnecessaryaswearechinese

  pretendtolovingit感觉有点别扭,我也不知道是不时用-ing形式,你再查一下喽!

2020-12-18 01:36:16

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