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　　TodayIwanttotalkmyhobbywithus.WatchinganimeisoneofthefavoritethingsIliketodo.Someonemaysaywatchinganimeisawasteoftimeandkindofnaivething,butIdon'tthinkso.Infact,Icanlearnalotfromwatchinganime.Forexample,tha

　　TodayIwanttotalkmyhobbywithus.

　　WatchinganimeisoneofthefavoritethingsIliketodo.Someonemaysaywatchinganimeisawasteoftimeandkindofnaivething,butIdon'tthinkso.Infact,Icanlearnalotfromwatchinganime.

　　Forexample,thattheanimetaughtmenevergiveupandithelpsmehaveconfidence.

　　Italsotoldustolearntobelievefriendsandmakeusbeoutgoing.SuchasBleach,Naruto,natsumeyuujinchou.

　　Ilikethepersonintheanimetoo.Becausetheyaremorestrongerandwarmerthantherealpeople.Theyalwaysrespecttheirenemy.Andthebestemotionisshowedintheanime.

　　Watchinganimemakemefeelbetterinmytruelife.Becauseanotherworldismorecleaningandtrue.

　　Inaword,Iloveanimewhatabestthinginmyheart.是自己写的,要背下来做Eglishreporte,看看有没有错误

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2020-12-18 02:36

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何宏宏

　　这个是我个人意见.

　　首先,第一段的withus没有多大必要,这要的表达也不对

　　第二段的1.WatchinganimeisoneofthefavoritethingsIliketodo.（do改成doing）

　　2.Someonemaysaywatchinganimeis(awasteoftime）（这里改成wastingtime)and(+个a)kindofnaivething,

　　3.Icanlearnalot（+ofthings）fromwatchinganime.

　　4.Italsotoldus(+how)tolearntobelievefriendsandmakeusbeoutgoing.

　　5.Becausetheyaremore(不要more)strongerandwarmerthantherealpeople

　　6.Watchinganimemake(makes)mefeelbetterinmytruelife.

　　7.Becauseanother(换成theanime‘s）worldismorecleaningandtrue.

　　不管怎么说,这样打好辛苦的!

2020-12-18 02:37:49

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