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  这是我的英文简历,谁能帮帮找找语法错误~CurriculumVitaeINDIVIDUALINFOChinesename:ChengLiuEnglishname:AlexGender:MaleTel:(+86)134-2442-0054(+86)159-9961-4696EDUCATIONBACKGROUNDChangChunUniversityBachelorofIndustrialandComme

  这是我的英文简历,谁能帮帮找找语法错误~

  CurriculumVitae

  INDIVIDUALINFO

  Chinesename:ChengLiu

  Englishname:Alex

  Gender:Male

  Tel:(+86)134-2442-0054(+86)159-9961-4696

  EDUCATIONBACKGROUNDChangChunUniversity

  BachelorofIndustrialandCommercialManagementEarnedin2008/7

  EMPLOYMENTHIGHLIGHTS:

  BusinessAssistant:

  JobResponsibility:

  1.Takechargeofcallingandreceiptingtheoldcustomertoprocesstheirtreatmentontimeaswellasintroducingtheproductinformationforthem.

  2.Customerdatamanagement.

  3.Analysisthedataofsales.

  4.Cooperatewithsalesspecialisttofinishthesalesprocesssuccessfully.

  5.Alsohelpexecutivedepartmenttorecruit,designsomerulesandregulations.

  Achievement

  Begoodatimproveourhallmanagementsystemandgetthegoodcommendformmycolleagueandthecustomer.

  Harvest:

  1.AccumulatesomeexperiencesofthepositionofBusinessassistant.

  2.Upgrademycommunicationability.

  3.Topossessagoodconsciousnessofcustomerservice.

  SELFEVALUATION

  Fasterlearnerwithgoodadaptabilityandcreatively

  Outgoingpersonalitywithenthusiasm

  Strongresponsibilityandflexibilityunderhighpressure,goodteamplayer,

  GoodcommandofspokenandwrittenEnglish..

  Possesskeeninthesalesandmarketing.

  INTEREST&PASSION

  Musicandmovie

  Reading

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2020-12-18 05:02
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潘金龙

  1.就直接用Resume,这一点上用常用的就好

  2."INDIVIDUALINFO"---PersonalInfo.

  3.电话写一个就好

  4.出生日期或者年龄至少要有一项

  5.Jobresponsibility的第一条---Takechargeof改成Responsiblefor,receipting改为receiving或answering;processtheirtreatment?最后应该是tothem.

  6.Analysisthedataofsales.---Salesanalysis

  7.drawsomerulesandregulations

  .自己还是再好好改一下,有些用词似乎不是很妥当,再注意下单复数,你们的客人或者同事都不止一个吧

2020-12-18 05:06:38

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