【请帮我看一下这篇参赛作文有没有什么语法错误或者是什么毛病,这篇是我打算用来参加奥林匹克英语作文比赛的作文,我是初一的学生.MyhometownZhanjiangismyhometown,itisverybeautifulplace.Theskyi】

　　请帮我看一下这篇参赛作文有没有什么语法错误或者是什么毛病,

　　这篇是我打算用来参加奥林匹克英语作文比赛的作文,我是初一的学生.

　　Myhometown

　　Zhanjiangismyhometown,itisverybeautifulplace.Theskyisblue,thecloudsarewhite,thewaterisclear.

　　Inthespring,theweatheriswarmandcomfortable,wecanflykitesontheprairie.wealsocanhavethepicnic.Ithinkit'shappy!

　　Inthesummer,theweatherishot.wecanswiminswimpoolandeatthewatermelon.thewatermelonsaresweetandhealthy.

　　Inautumn,theweatheriscoolandcomfortable,thefishswimminginthestream.Autumnrainalot,butverysmall.wecanflyakite,youcanalsoseethefarmersharvestscene.

　　Ifwintercomes,theweathergetscold,butneversnow.Wecanbarbecueathome.Thefoodisreallygood!

　　Thisismyhometown,It’salovelyhometown.Ilovemyhometown.