【我写的英文的自我介绍,请高手帮忙看看有没有错误的地方,Hello,goodmorning.MynameisGaoYu,I'mthirteenyearsold.IstudyinDongGuanPrimarySchool.I'minGradesixClassone.IlikeplaycomputerandstudyEnglishverymuch,a】

　　我写的英文的自我介绍,请高手帮忙看看有没有错误的地方,

　　Hello,goodmorning.MynameisGaoYu,I'mthirteenyearsold.IstudyinDongGuanPrimarySchool.I'minGradesixClassone.

　　IlikeplaycomputerandstudyEnglishverymuch,andIoftenplaycomputergameswithmyclassmates.Noodlesismyfavouritefood,Ithinkit'sdelicious.Iliketheseaverymuch,soIlikeblue,too.Becausetheseaisblue.MyEnglishteacherisDuanXiaoqin,sheisveryfriendlytous,Ilikeherverymuch.

　　Thisisme,thankyou!

　　我写的,看看有没有错误的地方,另发出来一份中文翻译,