【各路豪侠可不可以帮我挑挑这篇英语自我的毛病!急用!GoodmorningItisreallymyhonortohavethisopportunityforthiscompete.IhopeIcanmakeagoodperformancetoday.I'mconfidentthatIcansucceed.Nowiwillintroducemysel】

　　各路豪侠可不可以帮我挑挑这篇英语自我的毛病!急用!

　　Goodmorning

　　Itisreallymyhonortohavethisopportunityforthiscompete.IhopeIcanmakeagoodperformancetoday.I'mconfidentthatIcansucceed.

　　Nowiwillintroducemyselfbriefly

　　I’mastudentintheNo.9middleschool.Aschoolfamousforforeignlanguage.I’maoptimisticgirl,Icansmilealmostineverysituation.Ibelieveeverythingeventuallywillgoeswell.I’mahonestgirl.Inevertellalie.Ithinkthisisoneofmyadvantages.Iinterestinreading,swimming,running,surfingtotheinternetandplaypiano.WhenIfeeltired,Ioftenplaypianotorelaxmyself.OfallthethingsIlikesleeping.Youknow,thestudentsinChinaarealwaysshortofsleepingtime.En,IadmitIamagirlwhoisn’tverydiligence,butwhenImakeupmymindtodosomethings,IbelievethatIcanconcentrationinit.

　　Thisisme,agirldon’tprefectbuthoneygirl.thatall.Thanks.

　　这是我要参加比赛的稿子~多提提意见也好