英语好的高手帮我改一下语法错误吧,如果句子不通可以适当的改改.是料理鼠王的.SETTING:First,Remywasrushedtoadiningroominthesewers.Whenhesewerscameout,hefindsitwasMrGusteau’srestaurant.Thenhisluckfe
英语好的高手帮我改一下语法错误吧,如果句子不通可以适当的改改.是料理鼠王的.
SETTING:First,Remywasrushedtoadiningroomin
thesewers.Whenhesewerscameout,hefindsitwasMrGusteau’srestaurant.
Thenhisluckfellintothekitchen.
CHARACTERS:Remy.
Anordinarylittlemousebuthehadagreatdream.Andhehasnotgivenup
hisdream,justlikeMrGusteausays
“Everyonecanbeachef.”
Linguini.He
wasashyboy.However,sufferedmanysetbacksafterstillbraveface,he
eventuallysucceeded.MrGusteau.A
reallygoodcook.IdolizedbyRemyCook,butalsobecausehethatRemycanhave
he’sgreatdream.AntoEgo.Avery
meanperson.ButsurprisinglyacceptedRemydodishes.
MAIN
CHARACTERANALYSIS:Talking
aboutthemovie’smaincharactersthereiscertainlyRemy.Althoughhejusta
littlemouse,butwecanseealotlikethehumanspirit.Henevergivesuphis
dream,sowecanseehispersistence.HehelpstheLinguinifindhisjob,sowe
canseehisgoodandhonest.Ofcourseheisaveryclearmouse.Heknewthat
human’sletterandcanlearnthecookbookveryquickly.Sowecanseehehave
extraordinaryabilityincooking.
THEME:
Whoisnottogiveuptheirdreamsbecauseof
theiridentity.JustlikeRemy,fortheirowndreamsafteralotoffrustration
butintheendhesucceeded.Nodoubttheirability,aslongasyoudareto
strugglefortheirgreatdreams,youwillbesuccessful.
CONFLICT:
Atthebeginningof,Linguinitoworkfor
thisfromtherestaurantchefdonotlikehim,wasunfriendlytohim,andheis
oftenexcluded.ThechefisalwaysangrybecauseLinguiniboughtthemouseto
thekitchen.WhenLinguinibecameachef,theorginalchefjealousofhim,
alwaysfigureouthowtomakehimafool.