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  去英国的个人介绍.希望大家帮忙改改语法..第二段可以加些东西.因为是说明一下英语能力和信心.还有第一段.是不是有点少?说的是为什么去英国..希望强手帮忙改改...ItwasonlyrecentlythatIrea

  去英国的个人介绍.

  希望大家帮忙改改语法..第二段可以加些东西.因为是说明一下英语能力和信心.还有第一段.是不是有点少?说的是为什么去英国..希望强手帮忙改改...

  ItwasonlyrecentlythatIrealizedwhatmyrealrolewouldbe.Andrealizedwhatkindofcountryissuitableforme.I’manassiduous,accommodatingandhumorousboy,sedulityandprecisenessaremymaincharacteristics.IamconvincedthattheeducationsysteminBritainismoreacademicandprofessional.BecauseBritainhasalonghistoryinhighereducation,TheprincipalreasonformydesiretostudyatUKisthequalityofteachinghereandparticularlyinmychosensubject.Ialsofindexcitingtheprospectofjoiningauniversityherewithinternationalflavoursandexceptionalresearchfacilities.IbelieveUniversityisaplaceforaccumulatingmoreinterests,formeetingpeople,forworkinghard,forfindinganicheinlife.IfeelIhavethecommitmentandconfidenceofgivingmybestduringmyuniversitycareerandafterwards

  TheEnglishskillisthemostimportantforapplytheuniversity.Myacademicpotentialisaboveaveragelevelinmypresentschool,andIalwayshelpmyclassmatestoimprovehisstudies.MoreverIhaveenoughEnglishabilitytosolveallofthequestionsthatImeetintheuniversity,becauseIstudyintheA-levelprogram,whichprovidegreateducationaboutEnglishandothersubjects,soIaffirmIcancommunicateprettysmoothlywithforeignpeople.ThusIcangetthecomparativeadvantagescomparewithotherChinesestudents.Thus,Ichoosetostudyaboardwithouttheleasthesitation,Ithinkit’saperfectstagetoshowmygeniusandimprovealot.Iwilltakeeveryopportunityandtrymybest.

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  怎么又是你

  TheEnglishskillsarethemostimportantthingforapplying.Myacademicpotentialisabovetheaveragelevelinmypresentschool,andIalwayshelpmyclassmatestoimprovetheirstudies.MoreoverMyEnglishisgoodenoughtosolveallthequestionsthatIwouldmeetintheuniversity,becauseIamstudyingintheA-levelprogram,whichprovidesgreateducationonEnglishandothersubjects,soIaffirmIcancommunicateprettysmoothlywithforeignpeople.ThusIcangetthecomparativeadvantagescomparewithotherChinesestudents.Thus,Ichoosetostudyaboardwithouttheleasthesitation,Ithinkit’saperfectstagetoshowmygeniusandimprovemyself.Iwilltakeeveryopportunityandtrymybest.

  你的行文还是很中国式,以后写东西不要老用中文去想然后翻译过来.

  第一段够多了,其实我认为一二两段介绍自己的应该整合起来,然后再把第一段说想去英国的原因独立一段更好

2020-12-18 23:12:52

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