MyViewOnPrivateTutoring(家教之我见)

　　1．家教与日俱增；

　　2．家教的优缺点；

　　3．我的看法.

　　[写作导航]第一段可先围绕提纲开始,然后引出家教也有优缺点；第二段主要围绕优点来写,可从对家长、对从事家教的大学生以及对孩子本人等几方面来谈；第三段谈缺点,可从孩子的娱乐、从事家教的大学生的学习等方面来谈；第四段谈我的看法,弊大于利.

　　[范文]

　　Nowadays,anincreasingnumbersofparentsaskcollegestudentstoactasprivatetutorstotheirkids.Likeeverythingelse,privatetutoringalsohasadvantagesanddisadvantages.Generallyspeaking,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.

　　First,privatetutoringishelpfultotheparents.Manyparentsaresobusywiththeirworkthattheyhavenotimetohelptheirchildrenwiththeirlessons.Besides,privatetutoringisgoodforthetutorsthemselves.Theycanmakesomemoneywhileprovidingaserviceforothers.Mostimportantofall,privatetutoringisbeneficialforkids.Sincetheparentscan＇thelpwhenthekidshaveproblems,privatetutoringseemstobeawisechoice.

　　However,privatetutoringalsohasdisadvantages.Tobeginwith,ittakessomuchofthekid＇stimethattheycanhardlyfindtimeforrestandamusement,whichisharmfultotheirhealth.Tomakemattersworse,sometutorshavetoomanykidstoteachsothattheyneglecttheirstudiesatschool.Worstofail,sometutorsonlyoffertipsfortesttakingratherthanteachingkidswhatisreallyneeded.

　　Accordingtotheaboveanalysis,itisclearthatthedisadvantagesoutweightheadvantages.Therefore,itisproposedthatgreatemphasisbelaidonthestimulationofthekid＇slearningandthecultivationoftheirpotentialMoreover,kidsshouldbegivenmoretimetoplaysothatanewandhealthygenerationwillemerge.