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　　英文信修改错误求大神帮助

　　这信里有很多错误,包括介词,时态,拼写,词汇,语法,标点,分段,漏词,请帮忙改正一下其中的错误,Itisagreathonourformetowriteyouthisletter.ThankyouforyourkindnessinthevisitImaketoyourfamilylastmonth.Iamhaveingmanyhappymemorysofyourfamilyespeciallyyourmother.Sheisthebestcookerintheworld?Iwasverysurprisedofyourtown.ItisextremelypleasantandnotsoindustrialthatIexpected.IalsolikedyourneighboursandInotforgetfamiliaruniversitystudents.IenjoyedtheactivitieswedoneandIsendyouthebestphotographsofourcampingtripinmynextletter.Pleasecometoaholidayinmyfamily.Ourhouseisstandinginalake.Myfatherwillletyoutoborrowhislittleboat.BeachesherearewonderfulandnowisbecomingsummersowecangoswimmingwhichIknowyouenjoy.Incloudydayswecanvisithugeshoppingswhichareverypopularfortourists.I'mexpectingyourletterwithacheerfulheart.