一篇英语作文,鉴定一下有没有语法错误.agoodteacherinmymindihadagoodteachercalledmisslily.shewasaforeignlanguageteacheratmyjuniorhighschool,shewasfromamerica,butherchinesespeakverywellandfluent,ithinkth

　　一篇英语作文,鉴定一下有没有语法错误.

　　agoodteacherinmymind

　　ihadagoodteachercalledmisslily.

　　shewasaforeignlanguageteacheratmyjuniorhighschool,shewasfromamerica,butherchinesespeakverywellandfluent,ithinkthatfirstimpressionareveryimportant.myfirstimpressionofmisslilywasthatshewaskindandfun.sometimes,sheusedcomputertoletuswatchedenglishmoviebutdidn'thadchinesesubtitle.

　　oneday,ifailedinexamsandifeltsosad.misslilyletmetoherteacher'sofficeandsingedasongforme,icanremeberthesongcalled

　　idon'tforgether,becauseneverhaveateachercareformelikeher.

　　有语法和单词错误请帮我改正，