求高手帮我改下英语作文有什么不足的或者错误指点下,帮我改改求大侠帮帮忙我的作文：MYTEACHERWhenIwasinchildhood,inmanypeople'seyes,Iwasabadboywhoalwaysdidn'tabidebyschool'sregulars,usuallyappea

　　求高手帮我改下英语作文有什么不足的或者错误指点下,帮我改改

　　求大侠帮帮忙我的作文：MYTEACHER

　　WhenIwasinchildhood,inmanypeople'seyes,Iwasabadboywhoalwaysdidn'tabidebyschool'sregulars,usuallyappealedtoforceorassassinatedtheircharactersifsomebodydidn'tobeywithwhatIsaid

　　IwasstudyinginschoolAaffiliatedtoschoolBwhereImeetthefirstandimportantteacher---MissChenwhowasgreattomyappetiteasateacherinmymindandIwasinaweof.Whenshemeetusatthefirsttime,shesaid:"Fromnowon,Iwillbeyourpresident,Ifyouhaveanyproblemsinyourlivingorstudying,Iwillhelpyouandtrytoputacrosshowtosolvethem."andatthesametime,sheappealtousthatwemustaidoneanotheranddevelopourmorallyintellectuallyphsycallyandesthetically.

　　AlthoughIhadmanyfaultsMissChendidn'tthinkIwassobad.Sheencouragedmeandletmeundertakethemonitorofourclass.Fromthatday,IwasgettingaroundtothinkingaboutwhatImustdoandwhatIshouldn'tdo.Eventually,Ibecomeagoodboyandallouttostudywhentheexaminationwascomingaround.Atlast,Igotallbutthegreatestachievementinmyclass.

　　Thankyou!MissChen!