求英语作文改错啊,帮我看看我的作文语法或者单词或者其他什么错的~StylesofgooddeedsThisworldtherearealotofgooddeeds,somepeoplethinkthatspiritisakindofgooddeed,somepeoplethinkthatactionisakindofg

　　求英语作文改错啊,帮我看看我的作文语法或者单词或者其他什么错的~

　　Stylesofgooddeeds

　　Thisworldtherearealotofgooddeeds,somepeoplethinkthatspiritisakindofgooddeed,somepeoplethinkthatactionisakindofgooddeed.Today,iwilltalkaboutgooddeeds.Inmyopinion,ithinkgooddeedshavetwostyleslikespiritandaction.

　　Tostarewith,agooddeedisakindofspirit.First,smileisveryimportantthings,everyonecansmile,asmileisawonderfulthings.Forexample,ifyouwanttotalkaboutbusiness,smilewouldmakepeopletorelax,smilewillpromotethenegotiations.Thesmilereallyisthebenevolencesymbol,thejoyfulfountainhead.Smilecanletyoutosucceed,sosmileisagooddeedaboutspirit.Second,smilecanbattercommunicatewithpeoplesmileistheworld’smostamazingthingone.Ifyoualwayssmile,youcanmakealotofnewfriends,becausesmileisakindofverygoodspiritexchanges.Inaddition,loveisantherspiritkindofgooddeed.First,thefamilyhasgivenyoueverything,youneedtoreturnhome.Friendshasgivenyoualotofhappiness,youneedtoreturnthem.Forexample,ifyourparentsareold,youneedtotakecareofthem,andneedtogivethemmoralsupport,oftenaccompanyattheirside.Givethemlove.Second,friendshasgivenyoualotshappinessandhelp,youneedtoreturnthem.Forexample,ifyourfriendshavesomeproblem,youneedtohelpthemandgivethemahug.Givethemmoralsupport.Ithinkitisgooddeedsaboutspirit.

　　Next,iwilltalkabouttheactionstyleofgooddeeds.Firstofall,ithinkvolunteerisagoodthing.Volunteercanhelpalotofpeople.Forexample,inthisworld,therearemanypeoplewhoareneedofhelp.Volunteeroftenhelpthesepeople,givethemsomefoodsorwater.Second,volunteercanmakepeoplehappyandrelax.Forexample,volunteeroftenshowsomeinterestingprograms,theseprogramswouldmakepeoplehappyandrelaxed.Inaddition,ithinkcharitableorganizationisanothergoodthingaboutaction.First,thecharitableorganizationcanhelppoorpeopleandgivepoorpeoplenewhome.Forexamplemanypoorpeopledon'thavethemoneytocuredisease,thecharitableorganizationalwaysgiventhispeoplemoneyandhelpthemfindhospital.Second,thecharitableorganizationsoftengivepoorpeoplenewhome.Forexample,inAfrica,alotofthepoorpe