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　　Well,I’dliketotalkaboutmyfatherwhomIadmiremost.Lastyear,wecelebratedhissixtiethbirthdayandfromthenonhecouldenjoytherestofhislife.Hehadworkedforover40years,servingfirstinarmyandlateringovernment.Tomeheisalovingfather,avaliantsoldierandacompetentofficer.Itwasamazingreallythathebecamesuchagreatmanconsideringallthehardshipheendured.Whenhewasonlytwoyearsold,bothofmygrandparentspassedaway,leaving3childreninpovertyamongwhomtheoldestwasonly9yearsold.Icanhardlyimaginehowtheymanagedtosurvivethesedays.Perhapsbecauseofthis,myfatherlovesthefamilyverymuch.Istillrememberthehappytimewhenhetoldmestorieseveryeveninginmychildhoodandthereisnodoubthewilldoanythingtomakemehappy.Wearesoproudofhimbecauseheoncecommandedananti-aircompanyintherealbattleinVietnamand3badgesprovedhispurenerve.Asagovernmentofficer,healsoshowedhimselfahardworkingmanwhowasalwayswillingtohelpothers.