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  求助帮忙看看小作文剑桥7text1的第一次写请专业人士给个分数和建议修改等跪谢·~Fromthetablebelowwecangettheinformationthatpercentageofnationalconsumerexpenditureisquitedifferent.Studingthisdat

  求助帮忙看看小作文剑桥7text1的第一次写请专业人士给个分数和建议修改等跪谢·~

  Fromthetablebelowwecangettheinformationthatpercentageofnationalconsumerexpenditureisquitedifferent.Studingthisdatawecangetclosetothisfivecontriesandtrytoknowmoreabouttheirpeopleortheircountry.

  First,asweseenconsumersofIrelandandTurkeyarespendmostoftheirmoneyonfood、drinksortobacco.Ithinkmostofthepeopletherearelikeeatingandnomatterwhathappenedtheydonotwanttodroptheireatinglevel.

  HoweverthepeopleinItalyandSpainspendmostoftheirmoneyonclothingorfootwear.ThepersontherearelikecatchingupfashionandveryopenIthink.InSpainpeoplespendonly1.98%onlesisureoreducation.Iguessthisisnotbecausetheirpeople’slesturelevelislowerthanothersbutbecausethegovernmentalwaysputavastnumberofmoneyonthisparts.Sopeoplethereneednotputmoneyonlestureoreducationthemselves.

  LastlyIthinkfromthepercentageofnationalconsumerexpenditurebycategoryof5countries.TheconsumersinSwedenhavethemostsuitablesenseofconsumption.Theyspend15.17%onfoodtofulltheirstomachan5.4%onclothingtomaketheirlifemorecolourful.Themostimportantisthattheyalsospendalotofmoney(3.22%)oneducation.Ithinkitisprovethateveryonethereisknowtheknwoledgeispower.

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  第一段的第一句话要修改:Fromthetablebelowwecangettheinformationthatdifferentcountryhasdifferentpercentageofnationalconsumerexpenditure.

  第二段的第一句话要改:First,asweseenconsumersofIrelandandTurkeyspendmostoftheirmoneyonfood、drinksortobacco.第二句把第二句中people前的the去掉.

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