请帮我检查一下,这段英语有没有错?我写的.Ithinkthe-查字典问答网
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  请帮我检查一下,这段英语有没有错?我写的.Ithinkthemostimportantthingofapersonishealth.Idreadfallingill,butlastweekendIhadatoothacheagain.Icouldnotsleepwhenatoothachegotmedown.Iamstillhesitatingtogoto

  请帮我检查一下,这段英语有没有错?我写的.

  Ithinkthemostimportantthingofapersonishealth.Idreadfallingill,butlastweekendIhadatoothacheagain.Icouldnotsleepwhenatoothachegotmedown.Iamstillhesitatingtogotoseeadentist,becauseIamafraidofthepainwhichiscausedbythedentisttreatsmytooth,Maybethisisalittleabsurd.IhaveevergonetoseeadentistwhenIwasacollegestudent.Thedentistdrilledmytoothandslitmygum,itwasverypainful.Hesaidthisistheonlywaytocuremytooth.Butatlastmytoothbecameblack.HeragedagainstmewhenIwenttothehospitaltoaskhimthereason,hespokewithmenaceinhisvoice.ItwasundeniablefactthatitwashisfaultbutIlackofevidencetodemonstrateit.Maybeheisanamateurdentist;Iknewhedefraudedme.Ididnotwanttoconflictwithhim.SoIgaveup.Theblacktoothofmineisnotshiny,butIcannotneglectitwhenIglimpseatmyselfinthemirror.ThemoreIseetheblacktooth,themoreIamscaredofdentist.SoIpostponegoingtoseeadentistagainandagain.Idonotwanttodenouncethedentist,nowIjustwanttoaskthedentistnottoexaggeratetoomuch,ifyouarenotsuretocuretheanyone’stooth,pleaseletotherdentistsdoit.Istillhavetogotoseeadentist.IhopethistimeIcanmeetagooddentist.

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  Iamafraidofthepainwhichiscausedbythedentisttreatsmytooth最好重写

  既然是BY后面就不能是整个句子

  IhaveevergonetoseeadentistwhenIwasacollegestudent.

  前面是现在时,后面就是过去了晕

  ieverwenttoseeadentistwhen.

  Hesaidthisis时态不对

  看不下去了

2020-12-28 22:04:20

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