请帮我检查一下,这段英语有没有错?我写的.Ithinkthemostimportantthingofapersonishealth.Idreadfallingill,butlastweekendIhadatoothacheagain.Icouldnotsleepwhenatoothachegotmedown.Iamstillhesitatingtogoto

　　请帮我检查一下,这段英语有没有错?我写的.

　　Ithinkthemostimportantthingofapersonishealth.Idreadfallingill,butlastweekendIhadatoothacheagain.Icouldnotsleepwhenatoothachegotmedown.Iamstillhesitatingtogotoseeadentist,becauseIamafraidofthepainwhichiscausedbythedentisttreatsmytooth,Maybethisisalittleabsurd.IhaveevergonetoseeadentistwhenIwasacollegestudent.Thedentistdrilledmytoothandslitmygum,itwasverypainful.Hesaidthisistheonlywaytocuremytooth.Butatlastmytoothbecameblack.HeragedagainstmewhenIwenttothehospitaltoaskhimthereason,hespokewithmenaceinhisvoice.ItwasundeniablefactthatitwashisfaultbutIlackofevidencetodemonstrateit.Maybeheisanamateurdentist;Iknewhedefraudedme.Ididnotwanttoconflictwithhim.SoIgaveup.Theblacktoothofmineisnotshiny,butIcannotneglectitwhenIglimpseatmyselfinthemirror.ThemoreIseetheblacktooth,themoreIamscaredofdentist.SoIpostponegoingtoseeadentistagainandagain.Idonotwanttodenouncethedentist,nowIjustwanttoaskthedentistnottoexaggeratetoomuch,ifyouarenotsuretocuretheanyone’stooth,pleaseletotherdentistsdoit.Istillhavetogotoseeadentist.IhopethistimeIcanmeetagooddentist.