Todaywaschildren'sday,Myparentstookmetothepark.

　　今兲是（is的过去式）儿童节,我的爸爸妈妈带我去公园玩,

　　（也可以写成：Iwenttotheparkwithmyparents.我和爸爸妈妈去公园玩.）

　　(Afterwegottothrpark可省略）weplayedRollercoasterfirst.

　　我们到达公园后,我们玩过山车首先

　　Itwasexciting.Then,weplayedatseesaw.

　　狠刺激.然后我们玩跷跷板

　　Infact,theparkwasverybeautiful.Therewasmanyflowersand

　　事实上,公园非常漂亮那里有很多花朵和

　　butterflies.

　　蝴蝶

　　Howfuntodaywas!

　　今兲真是有趣啊!

　　TodayisChildren'sDay.Myfathertakesmetothezoo.Therearemanykindsofanimals,the

　　tigers,thepandas,thelions,theelephants,thegiraffesandthebears.Theyaredifferentfrom

　　eachother,someareshy,somearebeautiful,someareinteresting,somearefriendly,some

　　aresocute.Butithinktheseanimalsareunhappy,theyshouldliveintheforest,becausethe

　　lifeinthezooaredifferentfromthatintheforest.