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  帮我修改一篇英语文章(高中的)我该上高三了.写的不是很好,希望能帮我修改下,MyhobbyEveryonehasdifferenthobbies,suchascollectingstampsorcoins.Myhobbyiscollectingnotebooks.Maybeitsoundsstrange,butifotherpe

  帮我修改一篇英语文章(高中的)

  我该上高三了.写的不是很好,希望能帮我修改下,

  Myhobby

  Everyonehasdifferenthobbies,suchascollectingstampsorcoins.Myhobbyiscollectingnotebooks.Maybeitsoundsstrange,butifotherpeoplecancollectstampsorcoins,whycan'tIcollectnotebooks?

  IhavehadthisspecialhobbysincewhenIwasaprimaryschoolstudent.OnceIwentshoppingandnoticedalovelynotebook.Lovingitatfirstsight,Iboughtitwithouttoomuchthinking.sincethen,IoftenfindthenotebooksthatarebeautifulorspecialwhenIamshopping.NowIhavebeencollectingmorethan100differentnotebooks.Itreatthemasmyowntreasure.

  Itisinterestingformetocollecteverynotebookthatattractsme.Itiseasytodo.neitherneedinganytoolsorequipmentnortoomuchmoney.Theonlythingyoushuolddoisjustchoosewhatyoureallylovefromavarietyofnotebooks.ThoughIwon'tlearntheworldofknowledgefromthesimplehobby,Istillcanenjoymyself.Ahobbyisagreatwaytorelax,isn'tit?Besidewhendoingcollectino,Iunderstandthatbeautifulthingsalwaysaroundourlives.

  Atlast,Iwanttotellyouwhatyoucollectarenotimportant,thematterisyourheart.

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  1.butifotherpeoplecancollectstamps1.orcoins,whycan'tIcollectnotebooks?修改:while也有转折的意思,此句改成下面的更地道:whycan'tIcollectnotebookswhileotherscancollectstampsorcoins...

2019-10-23 06:18:34

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