Myschooltrip

　　LastFridaywewentforaschooltrip.Therewereatotalofabout200students.Itneeded5schoolbusestotakeustothecountryparkwherewestaythereforaday.TheweatherwasveryniceandIhadmuchfunwithmyfriendsoverthere.Ilikeschooltrip.

　　我的学校旅行

　　上周五我们去了一个学校组织的旅行.共有约200名学生.它需要5校车带我们去国家公园,我们在那儿呆了一天.天气非常好,我有很多乐趣与我的朋友在那里.我喜欢的学校旅行.

　　Iambusyattheweekend

　　Iamgoingtohaveabusyweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,Iamgoingtoclimbmountains.Afterlunch,Wewanttobuysomecandiesandmilk.Intheevening,IamgoingtowatchTV.That’smyhappytime.OnSundaymorning,I’mgoingtothebookstorebycar.Intheafternoon,Iamgoingtovisitmygrandparents.Then,Iam.goinghomeat5p.m.Iwillbeverybusyontheweekend,butIthinkIwillbehappy.

　　我很忙在周末

　　我将有一个繁忙的周末.星期六早上,我去爬山.午饭后,我们想买一些糖果和牛奶.在晚上,我打算看电视.那是我的快乐的时间.在星期天的早上,我要去书店坐汽车.在下午,我打算去拜访我的祖父母.然后,我.下午5点回家.我将会很忙在周末,但我认为我将会很开心.

　　亲。。。。第一篇、可以修改下么？

　　亲，第一篇呢。。能修改一下么？

　　LastSunday,myclassmatesandIwentforafieldtrip.Wewenttotheparkbybike.Weallworebicyclehelmets.Ithinkit’sgoodexercise,andit’sgoodforourhealth..Ilikebicyclingverymuch.At9o’clock,wegottothepark.Wesawalotofflowersandanimals.Theflowerstherewereverybeautiful.Therearemanykindsofanimals,too.Wehadagoodtime.At5o’clockintheafternoon,werodebackhome.行吗？