我是个初中生,老师布置一篇英语作文,是有关"中国梦,我的梦",我试着写了一篇,但总觉得不太好,请指教并改正Everyonehasadream.Forourmotherland,thelargestdreamistomakeitsefforttobecomestrongerandmor

　　我是个初中生,老师布置一篇英语作文,是有关"中国梦,我的梦",我试着写了一篇,但总觉得不太好,请指教并改正

　　Everyonehasadream.Forourmotherland,thelargestdreamistomakeitsefforttobecomestrongerandmorebeautifulintheworld.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ialsohaveadream.Mydreamistobecomeanastronautinthefuture..WhenIwasalittlechild,Ibecameinterestedinscienceandspace.Ireadalotofbooksaboutscienceandspace.IadmiretheastronautsfortheircourageandachievementandIdreamedofwalkinginspaceoneday.ButIknowmydreamwon’tcometrueunlessIdomybest.SoImakeupmymindtolearnasmuchaspossibleatschool.Asthesayinggoes,“Whereisawill,thereisaway”,IbelieveIwillachievemydreamaslongasIsticktomygoal.IhopeIwillmakeacontributiontorealizingChina’sdream.