【英语作文评析,三级水平,正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,MyNewFriendThisismynewfriendMary.SheisAmerican,butshelivesinBeijingwithherparentsnow.Sheis12yearsold,andinClassTwoGradeSeven.Wearegoodf】

　　英语作文评析,三级水平,正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,

　　MyNewFriend

　　ThisismynewfriendMary.SheisAmerican,butshelivesinBeijingwithherparentsnow.Sheis12yearsold,andinClassTwoGradeSeven.Wearegoodfriends.

　　IofteneatmealswithMaryandherparents,shelikeseatdumplingsforbreakfast;meat,riceandvegetablesforlunch;forsupper,shelikeseatingnoodles.ShelikeseatingChinesefoodsverymuch.