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  【我的雅思作文评分Inrecentyears,manyyoungpeopledecidetofurthertheirstudyabroad.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofstudyabroadoutweighitsdisadvantages?Everymorningweopenoureyes,wefoundthatweborninthisrapidlychangingsoci】

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  Inrecentyears,manyyoungpeopledecidetofurthertheirstudyabroad.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofstudyabroadoutweighitsdisadvantages?

  Everymorningweopenoureyes,wefoundthatweborninthisrapidlychangingsociety,inparticular,intermsofworkingandstudyingetc.ifyouareanaficionadoofthestudyingabroad“debate”,youhaveprobablyreadatonetimeoranotherthatcurrenttrendsinthiscontroversyshowsthatthereistwoopinionsinthisquestion,whichistreathimastheangel,andotherindividualsthinkhimisthedemon.ThewayIseeit,Iamtotallyagreewiththispointwhichisthinkheistheangel.

  Studyingabroadmaycreatesubstantialbenefits.Tobeginwith,thispracticecanhelpfosterastrongsenseofachievementinmanystudentswhentheyhadfulfilledtheirschoolwork.Secondly,itisnotunrealisticthatstudyingabroadcouldwidentheirknowledgeandbroadentheiroutlook.Technically,studyingabroadcouldbringfar-reachingeffectsforpeople‘slife.Lastbutnoleast,itisnotuncommonthatstudentsmaygainhighersalarywhentheycamebacktoChina.

  Ontheotherhands,Chinaisacountrywhichisdevelopingallthetime.Sothatwhenwegosomedevelopedcountries[e.g,USA,UK,NASA]wemusttopayhigherfees.Forinstance,ifastudentcompletehishigh-educationinchina,hewillpaythefeesbetween$8000-$9000,yetifhefulfillhisuniversitytimeinUSA,thefeeswillbetween$100000-$120000.

  Hegelsaid:whatisrationalisreal,andwhatisrealisrational.Thisshowsthatthereisanythinghasitsprofoundsignificance,buteverythinghastwosides,hasitsmerits,musthaveitsshortcomings.Wecomeinthisinformationexplosionofthecommunityneedstheobjectivedialecticalmaterialismweseethings,ifheismoregoodthanharm,topromotehim,andifmoreharmthangood,tolimithis.

  Inthefinalanalysis,despiteofthenegativeeffectssuchashigherfees,Iamconvincedthatincitedstudentsstudyingabroadisintheinterestoftheindividualsandthesocietyasawhole,thankalot.

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2019-12-13 22:27
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李立芳

  首先,你的作文太chinglish了.外国人的表达你应该多注意一下.建议你多去看英文电影学习英文化的表达.其次,在雅思作文中是很注重上下文的连接词的.这个你可以去买一本关于雅思写作的书,书上就给你列了几乎所有常见的连...

2019-12-13 22:31:59

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