题目是目前很多发展中国家都在expandtheirtourismindustry.请说明理由.并评论这个现象positiveornot.

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　　Incontemporaryageandsociety,manydevelopingcountriesare//exploitingatalargespectrumof//用法有问题theirtourismattractions//可以去掉spectrum那个错误的词组,在句尾加tothefull.Thereis/areaconsiderablenumberoftourism/touristresourcesinsomedevelopingcountries,suchassunshineandbeachesinMalaysia.Asmoreandmorecountriespaytheirattentionon/tothetourismindustryandactivelyexpandit,tourismincome//contributesaheavy/highpercentage//搭配很别扭,takeup.in...totheirGNPs.Thisphenomenonisattribute/dtoseveralreasons/整句写法别扭,可改为.ismainlyattributedtothefollowingreasons.

　　Themostmanifestandsignificantreasonforthe/touristexpansionisthatthetourismaffects/directlyon/删theeconomy/ies注意单复数ofthecountries/directly.Withthe/删gradually/gradual这里需要的是形容词perfectionofglobaltransporting/删ingconditionsandthe/删constantconstructionofthe/删学会冠词的用法很重要其实很难主要靠长期阅读积累localinfrastructure,massive//用这个词来形容人很好笑,不是多是巨大粗大的意思foreigntouriststravelabroadtoenjoytheirvacations.Theystayinthe/删localhotelsandconsumecommodities;thus,thelocaltourismrevenueascends/这个词没错,用的很怪,你见过有老外这样用过?收入增长用increasegrowgouprise都可以andtheeconomyprogress//?这个progress是动词还是名词?aswell.Themechanism/playsexactlyinthegovernments’hands/完全没有这样的搭配用法.Besides,asiswell-known,itneedsnumerousmanuallaborstofulfillitsdemandasthetourismindustryisclassifiedto/as介词搭配也很重要theThirdIndustry/第三产业英文是tertiaryindustry,whichmainlyoffersservices.This,tothegovernments’satisfaction,alleviatethe/highincidenceofunemployment.Fartherspeaking,ithelpsstabilizethesociety.What’smore,mostofthetourismprojectsareeco-friendly(thatispreciselythereasonwhyitiscalledgreeneconomy.)andlow-cost.Therefore,formanydevelopingcountrieswhichareafflictedwithfinancialproblems,theexpanding/expansionispainlessandproductive.

　　However,everythingshouldbecontrolled/inalimitedboundary/还是搭配的问题.shouldbeunderstrictcontrol.Overly/这是个副词overexpansionresultsindisasters.Inspiteoftheabove-mentionedadvantages,theundueexploit/exploitationanddevelopmenthasgravedetrimentalimpactonthe/删environment.Sometourismspotsareunderpooradministration.Themisbehaver/misbehaviorsofthetouristsarenotheldout//你用这个词组想说什么?是stop之类的意思么?intime,whichmayleadtothedeteriorate/这是个动词ofthe/删localecosystem.Forinstance,therewasonceahorribleforestfireintheGreatMountain//这是哪里?inNorthernChinacausedbyatouristwhothrewhislighting/lightedcigarette//to./withoutputtingitout/删,多余.Thetragedyiswell/还是搭配不对very/quite/highlylikelytohappenagainifthe/删managerspayinsufficientattentiontonecessaryscrutiny//完全是胡乱的搭配,结果就是让稍有水平的读者读起来如鲠在喉别扭至极.Moreworryingly,somedevelopingcountriesexpandthenaturalresourcesatrandominsteadofplanningcarefullyahead/oftimeaccordingtothe/删environmentcondition.Itisabsolutelystupidandshort-sighted.

　　Ina/删conclusion,therefore,thetourismindustrybenefitsthelessdevelopedcountries,buttheauthoritiesmustmakealong-termplanandgetaclearperspectiveonthecurrentsituationsothattheycouldexpand/exploitthepreciousresourcesinharmony/harmoniousways.

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