【请帮我修改一下雅思作文Theissueistalkingaboutwhichcasesplayanimpotantroleindeterminingtheindividual'spersonality,isgeneticfactorsorenvironmentinfluence?atpresent,withthescienceandtechnologyever-accelerating,amulti】
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Theissueistalkingaboutwhichcasesplayanimpotantroleindeterminingtheindividual'spersonality,isgeneticfactorsorenvironmentinfluence?atpresent,withthescienceandtechnologyever-accelerating,amultitudeofexperimentshavebeenprovedthegeneinheritedfromourparentsmakeadifferenceduringtheprocessofpersongrowth.therefore,leadingtopeopleingrowingnumberareapttorecognizethereliabilityofgeneticscience
Nevertheless,anythingisnotabsolute.thenewsaboutwolf-kidsorbear-kids,whichalmosthavebeenwellknownbyworldasawhole.thisbabywasbornbyhuman,butnotcontainthebasiccharacterofhuman-beings,insteadofwildanimalsfiercelybehaviorandlivinghabit.itiswelldemonstratethatwhatissignificanceofsurroundingsforperson'scharacter,takeaccountofexperiencewehaveinlifeissounpredictableandpowerful,thusitisdifficulttogiveanconclusionforwhoistheprimaryelementbetweenofthem
Frommypointofview,idonotbelievethatthereexistedwithmajorinfluenceduringformingofcharacter,tosomeextent,itisowingtotheeffectofintegrategeneticsciencewithsocialenvironment.finally,shapeandconstituteourpresentcharacter.ifitisnottrue,thenwewouldbepredictedthebehaviorandcharacterofpersonfromthemomenttheywereborn
Inshort,weshouldnotignoretheimpactofexperiencelife.ifyouwanttobecomeasuccessfulandgreatman,itisessentialplaytheequalityattachonbothaspects
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