【英语帮忙修改文章错误这个是我自己写,但是老师说过我很中式英语,所以不敢拿上台Ihearastoryabouttwoman.onecalledknife,andonecalledfork.Theywerekillerandnoonecandestroiedthem.They'resostrongiftheyw】

　　英语帮忙修改文章错误

　　这个是我自己写,但是老师说过我很中式英语,所以不敢拿上台

　　Ihearastoryabouttwoman.onecalledknife,andonecalledfork.Theywerekillerandnoonecandestroiedthem.They'resostrongiftheyweretogether.Sothegovernmentwereverycaredaboutthem.

　　Oneday,knifeaskedforktoaplaceandtalked.Actually,theywerebrothers.Alongtimeago,theirparentshasbeenkilled.Theysworetokilledthemurderer.

　　Yes,theywerenotbelievedthisworldagain.

　　Knifefoundthemurdererfromtheirparents.Hequicklytoaskedforktorememberedtowithhimtokillthemurderer.Forkwasreallyexcitedaboutthat.Buttheywerealsofamouskiller,theycouldnotstaytogether.

　　ATnight,Forkhasbekilledbythegovernment

　　Nextday,Knifewenttothemurderer'shousequickly.Buthedidn'tseetheFork.Whenhewasthinkingaboutthis,heheardanoice.Itwasthegun's.Itmustbethemurderer'sgun,butwhenhelookedinsidethehouse,hesawmanypolicefromthegovernment.

　　Hewasdead

　　Someonesaid,IstheForktobetraytheknife.Butnooneknow.Actrallythegovernmentareknowtheirmoveatearly

　　Atthenetherworld,they'renotbrotheranymore,theyarepersonalenemyforever

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