帮忙检查一下这段英文有没有语法错误和单词拼写错误（英文）!•Helloeverybody.TodayIwanttotellyouhowtowalkfromschooltotheNewCity.First,turnleftwhenyouleaveschool.Thenyouwillseethe•QingheG

　　帮忙检查一下这段英文有没有语法错误和单词拼写错误（英文）!

　　•Helloeverybody.TodayIwanttotellyouhowtowalkfromschooltotheNewCity.First,turnleftwhenyouleaveschool.Thenyouwillseethe•QingheGarden,acrossthestreet,you'llseeSuningSupermarket.Youcanbuymanythingsthere.•AtthesecondcrossingyouwillseetheChangyangGarden.Pleaseturnright,intheendofQingliangmenStreet,youwillseeafewtallbuildings.ThisisChenlongGarden.NowyoucanseeNewCityfromadistance.Thereisabroadroadinfrontofyoureyes,throughit.Therearemanysmallshopsandapostofficeonthesideoftheroad.Walkaboutamiledowntheroad,youwillseeNewCicyPlaza.

　　•NewCityPlazahasfourfloors.Onthefourthfloor,wecanwatchmoviesandplaygames.Thecokesandpopcornthereisverydelicious.Manyrestaurantsandclothingstoresonthefirstfloor,suchasMcDonald‘sandKFC,butthechickenisnothealthy.Onthethirdfloorthereisalotoffoodsfromdifferentarea,IliketheKoreanbarbecuebest.Ifyoufeelhunger,youcantrysomekoreanfoodwithoutkoreankimchi.•Thankyouforyourlistening.whenyouhavefreetime,youcangotoNewCicyPlaze.