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【以“Differentpeople,differenthobbies”为题,写一篇60字左右的段文,越快越好,】
以“Differentpeople,differenthobbies”为题,写一篇60字左右的段文,越快越好,
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2020-01-14 20:19
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刘元珍
我比较推荐第二篇,第二篇的内容较充实.
但是第二篇内容与你的所规定的内容有些格格不入.
Differentpeoplemayhavedifferenthobbies.Somepeoplelikeplayingcomputergames.Somelikesplayingchessandcards.Somelikescollectingstampsandcoins.Otherslikedoingsportsandreadingbooks.Ithinkhobbiescanhelpusrelaxandgetknowledge.Butifwespendtoomuchtimeonplayingcomputergamesandcards,itwon'tbegoodforourhealth.Sowe'dbetterhavethehobbieswhicharegoodforus.Suchas,doingsports,listeningtomusic,readingbooks,playingthepianoandsoon.
Myhobby
Differentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies,suchasreadingandsoon.Butmyhobbyislistentomusicandsports.
Ilikemusicwheni10yearsold.Ilovemanykindsofmusic:suchaspopmusic,rockmusicandsoon.ItmakemefeelrelaxingwhenIlisteningmusic.Ithinkmusiccanbringmealotoffunandhappy.AsaresultI'mveryhappynow!
Aswellaslistentomusicandilikespots,too.Ilikebasketball.AndwhenIfinishmyhomeworkIlikeplayingbasketballwithmyfriends.Myhobbymakesmehappyandrelaxing.Iwillcontinue.
2020-01-14 20:21:47