【帮忙修改一下英语作文,急,今天要交,语句希望可以通顺点,标题:WhatJobsDoCollegeGraduatesWanttoTakeDirections:OccupationMaleFemaleTeaching5%45%Managers40%15%Businessman30%25%Lawyers15%10%1.目前大学毕业】

　　帮忙修改一下英语作文,急,今天要交,语句希望可以通顺点,

　　标题:WhatJobsDoCollegeGraduatesWanttoTake

　　Directions:OccupationMaleFemaleTeaching5%45%Managers40%15%Businessman30%25%Lawyers15%10%1.目前大学毕业生的择业情况2.男女学生就业选择的区别3.我的观点

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　　Jobhuntinghasalwaysbeenaheadacheforcollegestudents.Boysaretosomeextentdifferentfromgirlsintheirchoiceasisseenfromthegraph.

　　Intheteachingprofession,45%ofgirlstudentswanttobecometeachersaftergraduationwhereasonly5%ofboyswanttoteach.

　　40%ofboystudentswouldliketobecomemanagerswhereasonly15%ofgirlswanttodo.

　　Fortheloveofdoingbusinessmenandwomenisaboutthesame.30%ofmenchoosethisprofession,morethan5%ofwoman.

　　15%ofmenchoosetodolawyerwhile10%ofgirlspreferringthisprofession.

　　Canseethatwomenpreferastablelifeandmenprefertomakemoney.

　　Iwanttobecometeachersaftergraduation,becausetheteacherwillteachpeoplealotofthings

　　Inmyopinion,collegegraduatesmustlowertheover-highexpectationsandapplyforproperjobs