ItookatriptoShanghaiwithmymotherduringtheseven-dayholiday.IttookusmorethantwohourstodrivetoShanghaifrommyhomeinHaimen.Westayedinalargehotelontheeighthfloor.

　　Onthefirstday,Ijuststayedinthehotelandrested.Onthesecondday,mybrotherandIwenttoNanjingRoad.It’sthebusieststreetinShanghai.Whenwegotthere,therewerelotsofpeople.Wewalkedfromoneshoptoanother.IboughttwoT-shirtsandtwopairsoftrousersforthecomingsummer.TheT-shirtsandtrousersIboughtareallwhitebecausewhiteismyfavouritecolour.Mybrotheralsoboughtsomeclothes.Onthethirdday,mymothertookmetoJinjiangEntertainmentCentre.Itwasfullofpeople.Iplayedmanykindsofgamesthere.Ihadagoodtime.

　　Theotherdays,Iwenttosomeotherinterestingplaces,suchastheOrientalBrightPearlTVTower,theHuangpuRiverandShanghaiInternationalConferenceCentre.Ididn’tforgettodomyhomeworkintheevening.Ihadafullandhappyholiday.

　　或者

　　Iamaboyofeleven.Lastweek,itwasmyfirsttripinShanghai.AlthoughIonlytraveledShanghaiforoneday,Iwasveryhappyatall.First,IplayedinChangfengPark.Ihadphotoswithdolphinsandseals.ThenIvisitedYuGarden.Itisatraditionalplace.Iboughtmanysmallarticals.Afterthat,Itraveledthemosthighestbuilding—OrientalPearlTower.ItisalsothemosthighestbuildinginAsia.Inthetower,IknewalotofthingsofShanghai.Finally,IlookedatthemagnificentHuangPuRiver.IwassoexcitedinShanghaiandIwantedtovisitShanghaiagainbecauseIlikedthismordencity.