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  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

  删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

  Dear Yang Hui,

  I heard you'll have a two-weeks summer holiday and have decided to visit as much new places as possible.I don't think it's a good idea.My friend Li Hua goes to Europe last July.He visited four countries,and stayed for only three days in each of the country.He was always in hurry.Li Hua was neither on a train or a bus almost every day.When he returned back from Europe,he was very tiring.So I suggest that he travel to one country and visit only one city.Choose a city on the coast,or you'll be able to have a good rest at the seaside.

  Best wishes!

  Yours,

  Wang Feng.

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2020-01-18 21:33
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  Dear Yang Hui,

  I heard you'll have a two-weeks summer holiday and have decided to visit as much new places as possible.I don't think it's a good idea.My friend Li Hua goes to Europe last July.He visited four countries,and stayed for only three days in each of the country.He was always in∧hurry.Li Hua was neither on a train or a bus almost every day.When he returned back from Europe,he was very tiring.So I suggest that he travel to one country and visit only one city.Choose a city on the coast,or you'll be able to have a good rest at the seaside.

  Best wishes!

  Yours,

  Wang Feng.

  详

  71.weeks改为week,考查名词单复数.由于two与week之间加了连字符,成了一个形容词,不用加s,.

  72.much改为many,考查副词.place为可数名词,用many修饰.

  73.goes改为went,考查时态.lastJuly是过去,用一般过去时,goes为一般现在时.

  74.country改为countries,考查名词单复数.前面提到是fourcountries,这里指他在每个国家只呆了三天,country用复数.

  75.in后面加a,考查冠词.inahurry表示"匆忙,立即".

  76.neither改为either,考查短语搭配.neithernor"既不是…也不是…",eitheror"要么…要么…",结合文章,这里是李华要么在火车上,要么在公交车上.

  77.去掉back,考查短语搭配.returnfrom表示"从…回来".

  78.tiring改为tired,考查形容词.tiring"令人疲惫的",形容物质本身的性质,而tired是形容人的感觉.

  79.he改为you,考查主语.后面是在给他朋友杨辉提建议,所以用you.

  80.or改为and,考查连词.这里表示承接,用and,or是表转折.

2020-01-18 21:37:07

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