【几篇英语小短文,希望英语好的能帮忙检查一下语法上的错误修改一下,可以适当增添发挥一些.谢谢!1、Ihaveapenpal.HisnameieCarl.HecomesfromtheUSA.Blackishisfavoritecolor.He'stwelve.NowheisinBeij】

　　几篇英语小短文,希望英语好的能帮忙检查一下语法上的错误修改一下,可以适当增添发挥一些.谢谢!

　　1、Ihaveapenpal.HisnameieCarl.HecomesfromtheUSA.Blackishisfavoritecolor.He'stwelve.Nowheisin

　　BeijingInternationalSchool.Helikeschickenandhambugersverymuch.Soheusuallyhasthemfordinner.Hisfamiliesarehisgrandparents,hisparents,hissisterandhe.Hisfatherisaworker.Andhismotherworksinahospital.shealwayslookaftersomepatients.

　　2、Doraismygoodfriend.Sheoftenhassomeeggsandsomefruitsforbreakfast.Shealwayshashumbargers,fruitsandvegetablesforlunch.Andfordinner,sheusuallyhassomericeandchicken.Oh,shelikesChinesefood,too.IthinkDoraisveryhealthy.

　　3、

　　①Wheredoyouwanttogoforapicinic?

　　②Whodoyouwanttogowith?

　　③Whatwouldyouliketotakewithyou?

　　④Whatdoyouwanttodothere?

　　4、提示词：bigsale,salesgirl,kind,awhiteT-shirt,abluejacket,40yuan,100yuan,happy

　　DearMike,

　　I'mLiWei.MymotherandIgototheclothesshoptoday.There'sakindsalesgirl.Thereisabigsale.Iseeayellowpants,butit'stoolongforme.MymothersawawhiteT-shirtandabluejacket.Sheaskmetrythemon.Wow!They'reverycool.Guess!Howmucharethey?HAHA!They'reonehunderdandfortyyuan.They'reverycheap!Ilikethemverymuch.Mymotherbuysthemforme.I'mveryhappy.Ilookforwordtoyourletter.

　　Yours,

　　LiWei

　　3少了一句标题，应该是“写一篇关于野餐的小短文，下列问题可能对你有帮助”。

　　还有2，希望能帮助我再加上几句，谢谢。