【谁帮我做下这个短文改错Onedaythesunwasverystrong,Jimwassotiredtowalk.Therewasnotreesneartheroad,soherestedunderabigrock.Afterdrinkingsomewater,hetookhisshirt,laydownonthegroundandfallasleepatonce.hewas】
谁帮我做下这个短文改错
Onedaythesunwasverystrong,Jimwassotired
towalk.Therewasnotreesneartheroad,soherested
underabigrock.Afterdrinkingsomewater,hetookhis
shirt,laydownonthegroundandfallasleepatonce.
hewasverytiredthathedidn'twakeupuntiltheevening.
hewasjustabouttojumpwhilehefeltsomethingmoving
nearhisfeet.Helookedupandsawalongblacksnake.
Jimwassofrighteningthathedidn'tdaretomove.The
snakebegantocrawlacrosshislegs.Itcrawledonand
onuntilitwasdisappearedundertherocks,Jimjumped
tohisfeet,pickeduphisshirtandrandowntheroad.
并解释一下为什么那么改