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  【谁帮我做下这个短文改错Onedaythesunwasverystrong,Jimwassotiredtowalk.Therewasnotreesneartheroad,soherestedunderabigrock.Afterdrinkingsomewater,hetookhisshirt,laydownonthegroundandfallasleepatonce.hewas】

  谁帮我做下这个短文改错

  Onedaythesunwasverystrong,Jimwassotired

  towalk.Therewasnotreesneartheroad,soherested

  underabigrock.Afterdrinkingsomewater,hetookhis

  shirt,laydownonthegroundandfallasleepatonce.

  hewasverytiredthathedidn'twakeupuntiltheevening.

  hewasjustabouttojumpwhilehefeltsomethingmoving

  nearhisfeet.Helookedupandsawalongblacksnake.

  Jimwassofrighteningthathedidn'tdaretomove.The

  snakebegantocrawlacrosshislegs.Itcrawledonand

  onuntilitwasdisappearedundertherocks,Jimjumped

  tohisfeet,pickeduphisshirtandrandowntheroad.

  并解释一下为什么那么改

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2020-01-18 07:47
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傅小兰

  不是十行吗?怎么变成十一行了?

  1.so→too

  too和后面的to构成too...to...结构,意思是“太...而不能...”

  2.was→were

  后面的trees是复数,所以谓语动词也用复数形式

  3.took和his中间加入off

  固定短语takeoff,意思是“脱下...”

  4.fall→fell

  and后面的fall是并列谓语,所以和took/lay一样用过去式fell

  5.very→so

  和后面的that构成so...that...结构,意思是“如此...以至于...”

  6.while→when

  此处when为并列连词,意思是“就在这时”=andthen,引导并列句,而不是时间状语从句

  7.up→down

  “蛇在脚边”,当然是lookdown“向下看”,而不是lookup“向上看”

  8.frightening→frightened

  frightening意思是“令人害怕/恐惧的”,frightened意思是“感到害怕/恐惧的”

  9.正确

  10.去掉was

  disappear是不及物动词,没有被动语态,所以它直接做谓语,不能再在其前加上be动词was

  11.正确

2020-01-18 07:48:59

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