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  【批改英文作文&缩减至300字DearPaula,hi,howaboutyouAreyoubusytobeahorrorstorywriterIhavereadyourletterbeforeandIamhappyaboutyouareaskingmetohelpyoudescribeyourhorrorstorysetting.Ithinkmyschoolisagood】

  批改英文作文&缩减至300字

  DearPaula,

  hi,howaboutyouAreyoubusytobeahorrorstorywriterIhavereadyourletterbeforeandIamhappyaboutyouareaskingmetohelpyoudescribeyourhorrorstorysetting.Ithinkmyschoolisagoodplacetobeahorrorstorysence.

  Myschoolissuitabletobeahorrorstorysence.Itisbecausewhenmyschoolisturnoffallthelightatnight,itisveryscareandgloomy.IhaveheardsomeonesaythatourschoolhavemanyrealhorrorstoryWhenIheardit,Iwasveryafraid.Somyschoolwouldbeagoodsettingforyourhorrorstory.

  ononeside,ourschoolsurroundingareahavesometress.Oneofthetresshasaropethatishanging.Itissaidagirlhadhangedinthattress,sinceshewascrossedinlove.Somechildrensawthegirlletdownwitharopeatnightandalsousuallyhearthepiercingsounds.

  ontheotherside,ourschoolhashappenedahomicidecaseaboutateacherwhowasMr.Haihadmentaldisord.Hekilledstudentsafterschool.Then,hewassuicide.

  Asweallknowthat,thiswaspostedinthemajornewspapers.Theclassroomwasrejectusing.Ithinkthisclassroomisabsolutelygloomy,emptyanddusty.Somegossipsaidthewallhadbeenseepageredliquid.Andnobodyknowthatwhatisit!

  Myschooltoiletisveryscare,itisbecausethetoiletisverywearandthelightisverydim.Ihave

  heardaterriblestoryfromschooltoilet.Itaboutagirlgototoiletduringalesson.Duringthegirl

  goingtoilet,sheheardasoundwassinging,butthetoiletwasnopeople.Thenshescreamedandranaway

  Coclusion,myschoolhasalotsofscaryplacesandstorybutIthinkthesetwoisthemosthorrible.Ihopeyoucanusemyschoolforyourstorybecausemyschoolisverysuitable.hopethissuggestioncanhelpyou.

  Love,

  Chris

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2020-01-18 08:25
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  该作文错误太多,无法一一修改.另外,不知作文的题目与主旨,如何改?

  中文的习惯痕迹太重.

2020-01-18 08:27:15

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