【初三英语作文,求批改.批改的话最好能改成初中水平,不要改的太高深了,Asweknow,studyingisstudent'sduty.Ifyouwantdoyourfavoritework,Firstyouhavetoworkhard.Andthenyoushouldgetagoodgrade.Finally,yourdream】

　　初三英语作文,求批改.批改的话最好能改成初中水平,不要改的太高深了,

　　Asweknow,studyingisstudent'sduty.Ifyouwantdoyourfavoritework,Firstyouhavetoworkhard.Andthenyoushouldgetagoodgrade.Finally,yourdreamwillcometruewhileyougrowingup.Althoughsomepeoplethinkit'sunfairtothesepoorstudents.ButIthinkthesepoorstudentswillgetgood-work'schangeinthefuture.