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DreamsLightenLife
Dreamscanmakeuspowerfulanddifferent.Itisgoodtomakeanefforttomakeourdreamscomctrue.
Ihavebeendreamingofbecomingadoctorsincechildhood.EachtimeIseesomeonesufferingfromadisease,Ifeelsympathyforthem.Also.Ireallyadmiredoctors,fortheycanhelppatientsbyusingtheirprofessionalknowledge.IknowifIwanttobecomeadoctor.Ineedtomastertheessentialmedicalknowledgeandaccumulateagreatdealofexperience.Keepingthisdreaininmind.Ineedtotakeactiontorealizeit.Asamiddleschoolstudent.IknowIshouldworkhardrightnowtomastersomebasicknowledgeandtrymybesttoenteragoodmedicaluniversity.Thisishowmydreamcanlightenmylife.NowIhaveagoaltofightfor!Mylifehasbecomecompletelydifferent.
Admittedly,itisnoteasytorealizeourdreams.Ithinkthemostimportantthingisthatwesticktothemandnevergiveup.Apartfromthis,weshouldalsousetherightmethod.
本文是一篇给出了简单汉语提示的作文。每个人都有梦想,把梦想写出来并写出梦想的作用。这符合中学生的实际,让每个人都有话可写。成文时应注意以下几点:1.文章内容齐全:(1)你的梦想是什么;(2)阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生,使你的生活变得不同;(3)你认为实现梦想需要什么。2.人称:以第一人称为主;3.时态:一般现在时;4.注意使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型,以提高文章的档次;5恰当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章表达自然、流畅。