哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改Goodafternoon,teachers.I'mverygladtointroducemyselfhere.Mynameisxxxx.I'malovelygirl.I'maxyearsold.I'mastudentofShiYanprimaryschool.I'maCla

　　哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改

　　Goodafternoon,teachers.I'mverygladtointroducemyselfhere.Mynameisxxxx.I'malovelygirl.I'maxyearsold.I'mastudentofShiYanprimaryschool.I'maClassTwoGreatSix.Ilikemyclassverymuch.Inmyclass,wehelpeachother,welearntogether.I'mveryhappy.Ilikereading,playinggamesandlesteningtomusic.Ialsolikelearning,especiallylearningEnglish.BecauseEnglishisveryinteresting,IstudyEnglishhard,somyEnglishisverygood.IbelievethatIwelldowellinthefuture.Iwon'tletyoudown.Thanksforyourlistening.