高手帮我批改一下作文（六级的）,并评一下分,Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideWiththedevelopedofsociety,anumberoffarmershaveanopportunitytoworkinbigaswellasprosperouscitiestoearnmoremoneyfortheirpovert

　　高手帮我批改一下作文（六级的）,并评一下分,

　　Left-behindChildrenintheCountryside

　　Withthedevelopedofsociety,anumberoffarmershaveanopportunitytoworkinbigaswellasprosperouscitiestoearnmoremoneyfortheirpovertyfamilies.Asaresult,itincreasinglybecomesverypopularphenomenonthatleft-behindchildreninthecountryside.

　　Manydisadvantageaspectshavebeenfoundinthesechildrenwhoareleftintheirhomes.Tobeginwith,itiseducationproblem.Justasanoldsayingthatparentsarethefirstteacherintheirchildren.Goodhabitofwritinghomeworkanddiligentmannerswouldhavebeenkeptonchildrenwhoarestillyoungunlesstheirparentshavetakengoodcareof.What’smore,inviewofleft-behindchildren’sparentsworkoutofcountrysideforlongterm,thesechildrenwillfeellonelieralongwithlackofalotoflovefromtheirparentsthanchildrenwhoareinthesameages.Includingcausepsychologydiseasesaslongastheyareshortofcommunicationwiththeirparents.Besides,withoutparentswhoworkinbigurbancookdeliciousfood,left-behindchildrenwhoaregrowingbodieswouldfacetheproblemofdeficientnutrition.

　　Thiscouldbeaviableoptiontoassisttheissuethatgovernmentcouldhelpthecountrysidetodevelopfacilitiesandincreasewelfarestomeetthesuppliesoffarmers.Togetherwithourchildrenwillbeingoodcircumstancesonbothmindandbodyinsoonerorlater.