我写了一篇介绍上海和杭州的文章,希望英语学的好的帮我改改好吗?Goodmorningeveryone,todayIwillintroducethecitywherewewilltravel,isShanghaiandHangzhou.Shanghaiisthemostbeautifulandrecognizedthemostclean

　　我写了一篇介绍上海和杭州的文章,希望英语学的好的帮我改改好吗?

　　Goodmorningeveryone,todayIwillintroducethecitywherewewilltravel,isShanghaiandHangzhou.

　　Shanghaiisthemostbeautifulandrecognizedthemostcleancityinourcountry.

　　Highbuildingiseverywhere,shanghai’snightsceneisverybeautifully,theOrientPearlToweristhethirdtallintheworld,it’sabout468m.Andthejinmaotower,ThisincredibletoweristhetallestbuildingonChina'smainland(421m).ItsdesigncombinestraditionalChineseandgothicarchitecture.

　　Ifyouarenotafraidofheights,goingtothetopoftheJinmaoTowerisaninterestingexperience.Viewingfromthedizzyingheightsofthe88thfloorintheevening,youwillhaveanillusionthatShanghaiisaglitteringlightball.Onthe87thfloor,abar,theCloudNine,givesyouthefeelingofbeingintheclouds–sometimesthereisnoviewatallbecauseyou'resurroundedbythem.

　　OK,thenextisHangzhou,Hangzhouisthemostappropriateforpeopletolive,therehaveonelakenamedXihu,Xihuisverylargeandbeautiful,andtherehavethebestteanamedLongjin.

　　Shanghaihavealotoffamousfood,theSteamedBreadwithChicken,RibswithRiceCake,FriedSteamedBreadandanyotherdeliciousfoodarewaitingforyou!