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  【帮忙修改一份初中英语作文.thank..talkaboutplayingplayingispartofourlife.learninghowtoplayisalsoanimportantthing.Itmeansthatifyouknowhowtoplay,youwillgetacolorfullife.Herearemyopinions.ithinkplayingincl】

  帮忙修改一份初中英语作文.thank..

  talkaboutplaying

  playingispartofourlife.learninghowtoplayisalsoanimportantthing.Itmeansthatifyouknowhowtoplay,youwillgetacolorfullife.

  Herearemyopinions.

  ithinkplayingincludesalotofdifferentkindsofthings.forexample,playingsportscanhelpuagetingoodhealth.takingawalkisalsoatypeofplaywhichcanloseweighteasily.ofcourse,playinganinstrumentisalsoagoodwayofplaying.Duringthisperiod,wewillnotonlyfeelhappy,butalsolearnalotofknowledge.inashortterm,idobelievethatthere'snothingmoreinterestingandeducationalthanplaying.don'tyouthinkso

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2020-01-20 16:23
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  感觉你的文章太CHINGLISH了,也就是按照中文的逻辑写的,比如说这句话learninghowtoplayisalsoanimportantthing.

  改成Thisisanimportantthingtolearnhowtoplay

2020-01-20 16:27:53

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